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The cold wind blew across your face. Your small fingers gripped the note your Mama had given you, just in case someone finds you.

You really hope someone finds you, maybe they can help you.

Your stomach rumbles. You clutch it.

Not to forget feed you, god how you wished a nice stranger would feed you.

Lost in your thoughts you dint notice you were walking until you bumped into a tall man.

"Ah! I'm sorry!" You squeaked

You look up at the giant.

*Ludwig's POV*

"Feliciano! im not in the mood for laying in the stupid snow" That italian, good god, if only he was as good as doing millitary as he is at wasting time.

I felt something bump in to my leg

"Ah! I'm sorry!" a voice says

I turn around to see a little girl clutching a piece of paper, I kneel in front of her.

"What are you doing here little girl?" I ask

"Im lost and-" A flash

"She's-a so cute. Ludwig can-a we-a keep her!" He snuggles the little girl close to him, she was confused but actually cuddled him back

"What's-a your name bambina{1}?

"My name's (f/n)" She says happily

"What are you-a doing out here alone!?" Feliciano yells "A little bambina cant be out here-a all alone!, There are-a scary monsters who can eat you!"

Tiny tears prick the edges of her (e/c) eyes

Gottverdammt{2} Feliciano.

And now shes sobbing.

"Wait don't cry" I say trying to calm her "Feliciano was being dummkopf {3}, Scary monsters aren't going to get you while were here" I take her out of Feliciano's arms before he can say something even more stupid

"Can i see the note." i say looking it over

To whom ever finds her
please take her in, she's just a child. She's very sweet and i know she wont be a burden. just let her know that i love her and that i never meant to leave her.love, her mama.

"I guess we can take her home.." i sigh deeply

"YAY" said Feliciano and (f/n) together. oh god this is going to be harder than i imagine. Im going to have raise a little girl and a man-boy

"That means im her new uncle!!" he says taking her into her arms

"LUDWIG! THAT MEANS YOUR HER PAPA!"
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:iconhi-chewy123:
hi-chewy123 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
Please continue
Yes? :D
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:iconpoppopdrop:
poppopdrop Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student
We call my little brother man-child, and he acts just like Italy.
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:iconkei-is-cricket:
Kei-Is-Cricket Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  New member
Dying laughing. That's beautiful.
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:iconlexalina:
Lexalina Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Man-boy... Such a mean but accurate discription XD
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:iconjustthebestaround:
JustTheBestAround Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist
More please
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:iconhimaruyes:
himaruyes Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"That means im her new uncle!!"

I think you meant mother
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:iconroma2690:
Roma2690 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD haha yah!!!
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:iconhalotigress:
Halotigress Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg XD
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:iconindigocode:
IndigoCode Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
"Man-Boy"... I will never get over that name. XD
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:iconvampiredeidara:
VampireDeidara Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Student General Artist
yaya papa luddy
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:iconsherryveramuto:
SherryVeramuto Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha! that ending XDD
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:icondjcrazybanana:
Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
AHH monsters can eat me !!!!XD
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:iconinsanity-piano:
iNSaNiTY-Piano Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Plz continue it!!!
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:iconrubylitche45:
Rubylitche45 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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:iconanimelover3801:
AnimeLover3801 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013   Traditional Artist
D'aww, part 2 please??
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:iconkasukabe12:
kasukabe12 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
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:iconpucca2000:
Pucca2000 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Part 2, please? Meow :3
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:iconnicky-hetalia:
Nicky-Hetalia Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
hahaha.....man-boy...XD
Awesome story
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:iconmissstar489:
MissStar489 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol you better make a part two to this, or you will have a internet mob after you! XD
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:iconthunderz13:
thunderz13 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Student Digital Artist
MAKE A PART 2 !!!PLZ!!

oAo
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:iconkurosama2:
KuroSama2 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More bitte? It is so cute~
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:icongiantstorylover:
giantstorylover Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
PART 2
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:iconryu-ichi-chan:
Ryu-ichi-chan Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Adorable !! X3
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:iconcreativechaos401:
Creativechaos401 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Thank you!
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:iconylime-cxii:
ylime-cxii Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
man-boy XD
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:iconsherryveramuto:
SherryVeramuto Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More like man-child in Feli's case. XD
And man-boy for Romano XD
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:iconshadowleira:
shadowleira Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013   Writer
Feli: Hey~! where are your parents~!

Kid: They're in my tears! wanna see them?

Feli:Uhm...

Ludwig:*facepalms* you two...
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:icondjcrazybanana:
Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
XD
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:iconshadowleira:
shadowleira Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013   Writer
Making everybody laugh, aren't I?
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:icondjcrazybanana:
Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
yep~
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:iconshadowleira:
shadowleira Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013   Writer
Awesome~!
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:icondjcrazybanana:
Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
may I put in a request?
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:iconshadowleira:
shadowleira Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013   Writer
You may.
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:icondjcrazybanana:
Djcrazybanana Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
coul you perhaps make a
sweden x child reader plz
:iconbegplz: thank you
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:iconumbramoon:
Umbramoon Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
That Feli...
:iconmadgermanyplz: Dammit, Italy..!
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xxSoldierSiplexx Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This post...just...just perfection.
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:iconumbramoon:
Umbramoon Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Really? I don't think its THAT funny...
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:iconchoclate-dreams:
Choclate-Dreams Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student General Artist
oh feli x3
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:iconhetafan123:
hetafan123 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
CUTE~!
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:iconcreativechaos401:
Creativechaos401 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Thank you!
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